Nov 28, 2008

AFL 3A Group 8 Persuade

9522019 李慧苓

9522021 林善蓁

9522023 鄭宜欣

9522063 李亞璇

9522079 許乃文

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Anonymous said...
December 29, 2008 at 7:52 PM  

李慧苓
Strength
ppt design is good and creative.

Weakness
1. Laugh when she presented.
2. Forgot her lines.

林善蓁
Strength
1. Shook pictures! Get the audiences’ attention.
2. ppt design is good.

Weakness
1. No intonation.
2. Too slow.
3. Forget her lines.

鄭宜欣
Strength
1. Shook pictures. Get the audiences’ attention.
2. Video in the beginning is good.

Weakness
1. Too fast!
2.Video doesn’t work.

李亞璇
Strength
1. Good video. It’s amazing!

Weakness
1. Shake a little bit.
2. Too much information. Like an informative speech.
3. Don’t put “Thank you for your listening” in the end.

許乃文
Strength
1. The first ppt catches my attention. It makes me feel curious about the answer.

Weakness
1. Laugh when she presented.
2. I’m not convinced to buy lottery.
3. Some grammar mistakes.
Anonymous said...
December 31, 2008 at 12:20 AM  

李慧苓
Strength
Ø good smile
Ø fluently

Weakness
Ø poor pronunciation
Ø laugh out
Ø ppt design can not persuasive audience

林善蓁
Strength
Ø greeting
Ø Dressed up

Weakness
Ø wrong grammer
Ø ppt design is not good
Ø Bad time control


鄭宜欣
Strength
Ø good ppt design, video get audience attention
Ø well-organized

Weakness
Ø bad time control
Ø conclusion too weakness


李亞璇
Strength
Ø good smile
Ø video get audience attention

Weakness
Ø too many pictures on PPT
Ø carry real objects is better


許乃文
Strength
Ø well-organized
Ø greeting

Weakness
Ø grammar problems
Ø no smile
Anonymous said...
January 2, 2009 at 5:53 PM  

9522019李慧苓
Strength
* Greeting.
* Review the point
* Good interaction
* Show us some good questions
* Using body language

Weakness
* Forget some points.
* Sometimes laugh
* This presentation is like
entertain speech
* The content is too short

9522021 林善蓁
Strength
*Greeting
* Show some shocking pictures

Weakness
* Forget some words.
* Too nervous
* Points can’t convince audience.
* Time control

9522023 鄭宜欣
Strength
* Good visual aids
* Show us the videotape at begining is good
* Smile

Weakness
*The ppt is too short.
* Time control
* No conclusion


9522063 李亞璇
Strength
* Interesting topic
* Good interaction

Weakness
* No visual aids
* Too much information the the ppt
* Never show " thank you for your listening".

9522079 許乃文
Strength
* Greeting
* ppt is good

Weakness
* The speech is too short.
*Grammar mistakes
Anonymous said...
January 3, 2009 at 12:09 PM  

9522019

李慧苓

Strength

Greeting

Fluently

Good PPT design

Smile

Weakness

Laugh

No intonation



9522021

林善蓁

Strength

Greeting

Attention getter

( Shock pictures )

Smile

Weakness

Repeat words while forgot

Keep saying ”Un…” while forgot things

9522023

鄭宜欣

Strength

Good attention getter ( Video, shock pictures)

Fluently

Smile is beautiful

Weakness

Quite short

9522063

李亞璇

Strength

Ask questions

Video is interesting

Smile

Weakness

No real props



9522079

許乃文

Strength

Greeting

Smile

Weakness

Laugh

Grammar problems
Anonymous said...
January 3, 2009 at 11:22 PM  

9522019
Strength
-Eye contact
-Good PPT design
-Interaction with audience
Weakness
-Keep touching hair
-lack of intonation

9522021
Strength
-Impressive pictures
Weakness
-Nervous
-Keep say “umm” in speech



9522023
Strength
-Dress up
-Get attention at beginning
Weakness
-Speed
-Too nervous
-Time management

9522063
Strength
-Cool item
-Smile
Weakness
-Nervous
-Not persuade audience
-Too much information on slight

9522079
Strength
-Smile
-Interaction with audience
Weakness
-Laugh sometimes(not smile)
-Grammar mistakes on PPT
Anonymous said...
January 4, 2009 at 12:21 AM  

李慧苓
Strength
1.Greeting
2.Fluently
weakness
1.Laugh
2.Touch hair many times
3.No intonation

林善蓁
Strength
1.Greeting
2.Eye-contact
weakness
1.Poor time control
2.Forgot lines
3.Very nervous

鄭宜欣
Strength
1.Smile
2.Greeting
3.Attention getter
weakness
1.no eye contact
2.poor time control

李亞璇
Strength
1.Smile
2.Attention getter
3.Interaction with audiences
Weakness
1.Shaking
2.Nervous
3.Poor ppt design
(too many information)

許乃文
Strength
1.Smile
2.Well-organized ppt
Weakness
1.Grammar mistakes on slide
Anonymous said...
January 4, 2009 at 12:56 AM  

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9522019李慧苓
strength:
＊ well-organized

＊ review the points

＊ good interaction

＊ greeting

weakness:
＊ lack of intonation

＊ she touched her hair too often

＊she laughed at thewrong time

9522021林善蓁
strength:
＊greeting

＊show some shocking pictures

weakness:
＊nervous

＊forget her lines

＊time control

＊need more smile


9522023鄭宜欣

strength:
＊greeting

＊show the video

＊great attention getter

weakness:
＊speak too fast

＊time control

＊no conclusion

＊laugh at wrong time


9522063李亞璇

strength:
＊show the video

＊good interaction

＊greeting

weakness:
＊show the comparison

＊show too information on the PPT

＊speak louder

9522079許乃文

strength:
＊show the video

＊greeting

weakness:
＊time control

＊grammar mistakes
Anonymous said...
January 4, 2009 at 1:01 AM  

李慧苓
Strength
-Good opening
-Contact with the audience
-Smile

Weakness
-Stop to think the draft
-Voice is too small
-Speed doesn’t control well
-Props don’t show the interests of riding a bike

林善蓁
Strength
-Shocking sign
-Greet

Weakness
-Serious
-Think about the draft
-Too nervous
-Lack of organization

鄭宜欣
Strength
-Video at the beginning

Weakness
-Repeat the words
-Look at PPT
-No conclusion

李亞璇
Strength
-Good content
-Good conclusion
-Contact with the audience

Weakness
-Look at PPT
-Lower voice
-Too much information in the slides

許乃文
Strength
-Smile
-Good conclusion

Weakness
-Serious grammar mistake in the slides
-Voice is too small
-No smiling at all
陳宜婷 said...
January 4, 2009 at 11:24 PM  

Strength
Weakness

9522019

李慧苓
* Greeting.

* Review the point

* Well-organized

* Topic is good
Weakness
* Forget some words.

* Laugh

* Intonation

*Pictures can’t attract

people.

9522021

林善蓁
Strength

*Greeting

Weakness

* Forget some words.

* Too nervous

* Points can’t convince audience.

* Exclamation mark

9522023

鄭宜欣
Strength

* Good visual aids

* Greeting

* Shocking pictures

* Attention-getter

* Smile

Weakness

*The speech is too short.

* Time control

* Weak conclusion

9522063

李亞璇
Strength

*Greeting

Weakness

* Pictures can’t attract

people.



9522079

許乃文
Strength
* Greeting

Weakness

* The speech is too short.

*Grammar

* Should choose picture carefully.

* Can show the prop on the spot.
Anonymous said...
January 6, 2009 at 10:36 AM  

9522019李慧苓
Strength
*Greeting
*Review the points
*Use transition words
*Well-organized

Weakness
* Laugh
*No intonation
*PPT switch too fast
*Overlap the picture
*Touch hair often
*Pictures are not relevant with the topic

9522021林善蓁
Strength
*Greeting
*Dress up

Weakness
*Keep saying ‘um…’
* Pictures are not relevant with the topic
*Color of the words on PPT are unclear
*Forget the line
*Poor time controlling
*Pictures on the PPT cut the words

9522023鄭宜欣
Strength
*Greeting
*Attention-getter(show video and shocking pictures)
*Smile

Weakness
* Too short
*Shaking hands sometimes
*No conclusion
*Switching speed of the PPT is different with the speaker’s line

9522063李亞璇
Strength
*Greeting
*Good visual aid (ex: video)

Weakness
*Weak voice
*Too much information on the PPT
*Bad PPT design of first page
*She didn’t show the comparison well

9522079許乃文
Strength
*Greeting
*Smile a lot
*Use transition word
*Well-organized

Weakness
*Too short
*Grammar mistakes on PPT
*Pictures on PPT are not proper
Anonymous said...
January 6, 2009 at 2:01 PM  

李慧苓
Strength
Greeting
Eyes contact with audience
Fluently

Weakness
Laugh

林善蓁
Strength
Greeting
Eye contact with audiences

Weakness
Nervous
Forgot some words

鄭宜欣
Strength
Good attention getter
Smile

Weakness
Time controling

李亞璇
Strength
Good video
Greeting

Weakness
Nervous

許乃文
Strength
Good attention getter
Greeting

Weakness
Grammar
Time controling
Anonymous said...
January 6, 2009 at 4:07 PM  

Strength
Weakness

9522019

李慧苓
Review the point

Good interaction
The content is too short

9522021

林善蓁
Show some shocking pictures.
Forget some words.

Nervous

Intonation

Time control

9522023

鄭宜欣
Organization

Show videotapes

Smile
The ppt is too short.

Time control

No conclusion

9522063

李亞璇
Interesting topic

Good interaction


Nervous

No visual aids



9522079

許乃文
Greeting

Smile
The context is short.

Grammar mistakes

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