At this time, I had a speech that the topic is ‘persuade.’ I studied the chapter before I presented, but I didn’t understand very well. I thought I should go to meeting with teacher for I had no ideas. About its, I really apologize to teacher that I didn’t prepare before meeting with you.
During the process of speech, I took many helps from other classmates and friends. First, I had to take photos from McDonald’s with someone. Then, someone helped me how to do power point well. And another attended me to practice again and again. Maybe, I had prepared well so that I didn’t nervous before I went to speech. I really happy that I interpreted who I wanted to. Although I didn’t do very well, I had tried my best. Fortunately, I had attracted to audiences’ attention, and gave the interesting ways to waked up them desire to eat. I knew I didn’t do what the teacher wanted to, but I was grateful for teacher that helped me interpret what I wanted to known by them. I think I have to practice to make me speak loud and clearly. In speech, I still nervous when I presenting. Especially I was the last speaker, I have to hold open till eleventh hour. How horrible it is!
I am on the persuading topic this time, I had studied the chapter on the text-book and I noticed that how to do the persuading to the audience. After doing the presentation, there are many good or bad comments from my teacher and classmates. No matter the comments are positive or negative I already tried my best but I know there are still space I need to improve myself. For this time, when I gave a speech on stage, I was very nervous and also feared to make any mistakes. Before I went on stage I told myself I can do better than previous, and the only thing I need to do is to be confient and not to be too nervous.
I started the preparation with serfing on the Internet, I noticed that a lot of cosmetic ads are using pretty girls for attacting people's attendtion. So I found some videos and I put them together as my visual aids. I also took a video shot for the user feedbck by myself because I believe that it will have more conviction in the video. In addition, I gathered the videos and put them all together with Windows movie maker so I can play it in front of the class. This was my first time doing the taping work, so I did not know about the noises in the video. However, if I have another chance to make video again, I wont make this silly mistake again.
If there is another chance, I will tried to optimize my video because I believe the quality of the video is the most important feature in a taping. In addition, I need to sum up my points and organize what I am going to say, so that people are more about to understand what I am talking about. Moreover, I need to practice my voice with the pitch because people can not understand my words due to my low pitch. I am going to listen to some more English songs in order to enrich my speaking skill, and one day I wish I can make my pitch better
妤欣: Strength: 1.She was very confidence 2. Good topic. 3. I like her smile.
琬婷: Strength: 1.Sweet smile 2. Use the dog's ear is very cute. 3. Good topic. 曉瑩: Strength: 1. Good topic. Weakness: 1.Too nervous 2. Lag for a long time. 3. Didn't prepare well
亞文: Weakness: 1 Video is too noisy 2. Eyes didn’t contact with audience 3. Pitch is too low.
欣津: Strength: 1. She dresses very professional. 2. The topic is very good and interesting. 3. Her smile is very sweet. 4. She did good job.
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December 30, 2008 at 12:32 PM
At this time, I had a speech that the topic is ‘persuade.’ I studied the chapter before I presented, but I didn’t understand very well. I thought I should go to meeting with teacher for I had no ideas. About its, I really apologize to teacher that I didn’t prepare before meeting with you.
During the process of speech, I took many helps from other classmates and friends. First, I had to take photos from McDonald’s with someone. Then, someone helped me how to do power point well. And another attended me to practice again and again. Maybe, I had prepared well so that I didn’t nervous before I went to speech. I really happy that I interpreted who I wanted to. Although I didn’t do very well, I had tried my best. Fortunately, I had attracted to audiences’ attention, and gave the interesting ways to waked up them desire to eat. I knew I didn’t do what the teacher wanted to, but I was grateful for teacher that helped me interpret what I wanted to known by them. I think I have to practice to make me speak loud and clearly. In speech, I still nervous when I presenting. Especially I was the last speaker, I have to hold open till eleventh hour. How horrible it is!
December 30, 2008 at 12:51 PM
妤欣
Strength
-good attendtion getter with contracting
-good smile
-good voice quilty
-well prepared
Weakness
.pronunication
.kind of unnatural with the gift time
琬婷
Strength
- good outfit choosing
- good smile
- showing a lot of information
- good attendtion getter
Weakness
.Content is a little short
曉瑩
Strength
- good start with the logo and cloth
- good voice
Weakness
- not letting a right person to handle the ppt
-not well prepared
-wrong point with the limitation
亞文
Strength
- creative video
- nice outfit
- the ending makes the customer to take an action
Weakness
- did not get to the point
- video quity is lame
欣津
Strength
- good outfit
- good smile
- good way to present a fact with attractions
Weakness
- kind of nervous
- need more eye contact
December 30, 2008 at 12:52 PM
I am on the persuading topic this time, I had studied the chapter on the text-book and I noticed that how to do the persuading to the audience. After doing the presentation, there are many good or bad comments from my teacher and classmates. No matter the comments are positive or negative I already tried my best but I know there are still space I need to improve myself. For this time, when I gave a speech on stage, I was very nervous and also feared to make any mistakes. Before I went on stage I told myself I can do better than previous, and the only thing I need to do is to be confient and not to be too nervous.
I started the preparation with serfing on the Internet, I noticed that a lot of cosmetic ads are using pretty girls for attacting people's attendtion. So I found some videos and I put them together as my visual aids. I also took a video shot for the user feedbck by myself because I believe that it will have more conviction in the video. In addition, I gathered the videos and put them all together with Windows movie maker so I can play it in front of the class. This was my first time doing the taping work, so I did not know about the noises in the video. However, if I have another chance to make video again, I wont make this silly mistake again.
If there is another chance, I will tried to optimize my video because I believe the quality of the video is the most important feature in a taping. In addition, I need to sum up my points and organize what I am going to say, so that people are more about to understand what I am talking about. Moreover, I need to practice my voice with the pitch because people can not understand my words due to my low pitch. I am going to listen to some more English songs in order to enrich my speaking skill, and one day I wish I can make my pitch better
than now.
January 4, 2009 at 3:27 PM
妤欣:
Strength: 1.She was very confidence
2. Good topic.
3. I like her smile.
琬婷:
Strength: 1.Sweet smile
2. Use the dog's ear is very cute.
3. Good topic.
曉瑩:
Strength: 1. Good topic.
Weakness: 1.Too nervous
2. Lag for a long time.
3. Didn't prepare well
亞文:
Weakness: 1 Video is too noisy
2. Eyes didn’t contact with audience
3. Pitch is too low.
欣津:
Strength: 1. She dresses very professional.
2. The topic is very good and interesting.
3. Her smile is very sweet.
4. She did good job.
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