Seminar I-Group #2
9722605鐘丹旎 Connie
9722605 Connie
9722607蔡宜君 Vivian
9722607 Vivian
9722608簡瑋婷Sadia
9722608 Sadia
9722609胡佳瑩 Betty Part1
9722609胡佳瑩 Betty Part2
9722609 Betty
9722610蔡小玲 Leya
9722610 Leya
Nov 30, 2008
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December 1, 2008 at 9:14 PM
From Lynn's 蔡幸渝 comments
ID: 9722601
For Connie:
Strength:
1. Support examples
2. Flow charts
3. Professional PPT
4. Well-organized
5. Great application
Weakness:
1. Grammar mistakes
2. Too nervous
3. Pronunciation errors
For Vivian:
Strength:
1. Give a lot of examples
2. Clearly presentation
3. Great application
4. Be familiar with article
5. Well-organized
6. Professional PPT
Weakness:
1. Some pronunciation errors
For Sadia:
Strength:
1. Good explanations
2. Flow charts
3. Professional PPT
4. Dressed up
5. Expiations to clarify the differences
Weakness:
1. Too nervous
2. Pronunciation errors
3. Not very fluently
For Betty:
Strenth:
1. Clear organization
2. Narrow charts
3. Clear expiations by charts
4. Comparisons
5. Criticisms to the article
Weakness:
1. Too nervous
2. Abbreviation marks
For Leya:
Strength:
1. Interesting topic
2. Great application
3. Clear participants
4. Accurate Citation
5. Good charts
Weakness:
1. Too nervous
2. Not Fluently
3. Expression
December 1, 2008 at 10:37 PM
From Jenny 陳瑩珍 9722602
Comments on the presentations on October 20 :
Connie
A) Strength:
1. Interesting topic
2. PPT is well organized with clear points and steps
3. Dividing the principles and giving example for each makes it much easier to understand
B) Weakness:
1. Few grammatical errors
Vivian
A) Strength:
1. It’s nice to include a small conclusion to each of the research questions
2. Clear explanation with sufficient examples
3. Well-organized PPT with good animations
4. Looks very professional and confident
5. Proper eye-contact
6. Good response to questions
B) Weakness:
1. The color of the title on the cover page is too dark
2. Minor pronunciation flaws
Sadia
A) Strength:
1. Looks good!
2. PPT is organized
3. Good explanation with examples
B) Weakness:
1. Mismatch of color on slide 13
2. Presenting with the wrong PPT
3. Misunderstanding of the content (teachers’ perspective, not the students’)
Betty
A) Strength:
1. Clean and organized PPT
2. Excellent animations
3. Nice use of a table to compare
4. Very thoughtful to include personal reflection
5. Nice use of flow chart
B) Weakness:
1. Lack of fluency (too nervous)
2. The topic and personal information on the cover page is not centered
3. Misunderstanding of the content
Leya
A) Strength:
1. Interesting topic
2. Proper eye-contact
3. Good animations and flow charts
4. Good explanations
B) Weakness:
1. Too much empty space on some of the slides
2. Poor fluency and intonation
3. Papers stapled on the wrong side (difficult to flip)
December 3, 2008 at 10:51 AM
Connie:
Strength
1. The PPT is clear.
2. It is good that she applies the research into her study plan.
3. She shows the related movie to her research which makes us understand the topic.
Weakness:
1. Too nervous.
2. Unfamiliar with the research.
Vivian
Strength
1. Smooth and clear presentation.
2. Familiar with the content of the research.
3. Good handling ability of Q&A.
4. Eye contact with audience.
5. Explaining the definition of keywords.
Weakness:
1. Lack of examples makes her presentation unclear.
Sadia
Strength
1. Well-organized PPT.
2. The highlighted key words attract us.
3. Show her research method.
Weakness
1. The PPT showed on the screen should be the same with the papers that we were given.
2. Oral fluency should be improved.
3. Citation must show on the slide.
Betty
Strength
1. The reflection of the research paper.
2. Good use of tables makes us understand the paper clearly.
3. Good use of gestures.
Weakness
1.Some misunderstandings of the research method.
2.Big mistake of author’s name.
3.No eye contact with audience.
Leya
Strength
1.Show the interesting pictures.
2.Use the chart to show the comparison of the study.
Weakness
1.The volume should be louder.
2.The slides are too empty.
3.Plenty of examples would be more preferable.
December 3, 2008 at 3:51 PM
For Connie
Strength:
1.Good explanation to make us understand the PPT.
2.Good examples in the presentation.
3.Time control well.
4.Cute and sweet smile. Weakness:
1.Too nervous. (But we are the same.)
2.Speak too fast. (Several PPT can’t be read clearly)
For Vivian
Strength:
1.Clear and great examples for the PPT.
2.Great and Clear definition for the course and corpus.
3.Dress professional.
4.Attract everyone’s attention on the presentation.
Weakness:
1.Too fast.
For Sadia
Strength:
1.Explain problems and reasons well.
2.Nice dress.
3.Kindly inform that she had something wrong in PPT.
4.Nice smile. Weakness:
1.Too nervous. (We are the same, too.)
2.Speak not fluently.
For Betty
Strength:
1.Great and clear PPT.
2.Great chart and procedure map to understand.
3.Explain very well.
4.Good explanation for classmates’ question.
5.The article is worthy to read. Weakness:
1.Wrong researcher. (Too nervous)
2.Not much eye contact.
3.Too nervous to speak fluently.
For Leya
Strength:
1.Very clear PPT.
2.Cute pictures.
3.Interesting article related to Leya’s research.
4.Nice dress.
5.Soft voice.
Weakness:
1.Too nervous.
2.Not very confident.
December 4, 2008 at 2:05 AM
Connie
Strength:
1.Interesting topic, I really like it.
2.Clear explanation.
3.Natural performance.
Weakness:
1.Should pay more attention to understand your topic.
2.Many grammar mistakes
Vivian
Strength:
1. Natural presentation.
2. A little bit hard for me, because I really do not catch the meaning from top-down and bottom-up theory, but today, at the Q and A part, I just can distinguish.
3. Hard working student. (You did record your voice for 30 times? That’s terrible, I mean, you are a very hardworking student, you can catch my meaning, right?)
Weakness:
2.Maybe you can slow down your speed and make more explanation about your topic, not quickly mention it, because I do not familiar with this topic, but overall, your performance is good enough.
Sadia
Strength:
1. Professional ppt background. Neat!
2. I did really like your dress, especially your top. (Where did you buy it?)
3. I like your natural (Can I say “Local”? ^^)
4. vivid and active topic
5. Have your own thinking about your research idea, that’s good.
Weakness:
1.slide 4 should included the quotation
2.in slide 10-12, in the title part, we can not see very clear using blue background with red words.
3.I found you use useless paper to print the handout to us… (what can I say, you really did save your money…)
Betty
Strength:
1.good ppt organization
2.many beautiful charts
Weakness:
1.wrong explanation in the slide 7
2.nervous
3.eye-contact should with the audience
Leya
Strength:
1. Interesting topic, I like it.
2. Explanations that using your own words instead of reading the paragraph.
Weakness:
1.Nervous, but I think it will be better during these two years training.
2.Staple the wrong side
December 4, 2008 at 7:07 PM
Presenter：Connie
Advantages:
Pre-work is well-designed：
1) Let students choose their interesting topic is helpful for their motivation.
2) Let students themselves surf the essential data is good for their self-autonomy.
Post-work is well-designed：
1) Warm-up by responding to teacher’s questions is a god way to draw students’ attention.
2) Look up on line is also a good self-autonomy.
Disadvantages:
To give a more guidance to students.
1) Limit your learning goal by giving students certain topics of films to choose from.
2) Also guide students to log on the qualified websites.
3) Or that students want to surf some other sites is OK, but students have to cite the address of the sites, and then the teacher can supervise and give some advice.
Presenter：Vivian
Advantages:
1) Really well-organized.
2) Fluent speech to giving the audience a clear and general idea of your paper.
Disadvantages:
1) The paper seems like being in grammar class. Could it be applied to other classes, like a speaking class?
2) Spontaneously keep your eyes on your audience and adjust your pace on delivering your speech.
Presenter：Sadia
Advantages:
1) Application into your own research is a good trial.
Disadvantages:
1) A little confused with your objects, the students or the teachers?
2) A small size class, and how small?
3) In slide 13, the blue part with black words in is really hard to recognize the words.
Presenter：Betty
Advantages:
1) The reflection part is amazingly surprised me. That you sought for the answered and unanswered questions on the research is not like a junior researcher student.
Disadvantages:
1) Lack of the part：Definition of Terms, like what is a case study?
Presenter：Leya
Advantages:
1) Human beings are visual animals. You are used to inserting some brilliant pictures and that is an excellent way to impress your listeners.
Disadvantages:
1) Statistic numbers are the truth that a presenter is obliged to explain to the listeners. Or, just reading the chart is not enough to judge if there is significant difference in the study or not.
December 7, 2008 at 5:07 PM
Connie
Strength:
• interesting presentation
• the PPT was well design
Weakness:
• too nervous
• there were some grammar mistakes
• clear speech
• good explanation
• give more examples
Sadia
• interesting topic and it’s relate with your own topic, that’s good
•PPT is not clear
•should explain more about the article
Betty
•have your own opinions
•should read the article more carefully
Leya
•interesting topic
•clear explanation
•practice your pronunciation
Vivian
Strength:
• clear speech
• good explanation
Weakness:
• give more examples
Sadia
Strength:
• interesting topic and it’s relate with your own topic,that’s good
Weakness:
•PPT is not clear
•should explain more about the article
Betty
Strength:
•have your own opinions
Weakness:
•should read the article more carefully
Leya
Strength:
•interesting topic
•clear explanation
Weakness:
•practice your pronunciation
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